Reader Michael Johnson took issue with
Bob Staake’s recent Picture Book Dummy
. He writes:
I think that if the dummy remains as it is, it will mislead aspiring picture book creators into thinking they have, as Staake writes, “15 spreads… (and) a single page finale,” when they are more likely to have 14 spreads, a single page beginning and a single page finale. I’d hate to see a bunch of Drawn readers (or Bob Staake fans) show up at a publisher or agent only to be told that they’ll have to lay the whole thing out again.
I’ve attached a “corrected’ (if I’m right) version. It more closely resembles the children’s books I own - books from different decades, Caldecott winners, etc.
The revised dummy shows the flip-sides of the end papers as what they must of course be, i.e., end papers, too. The title page is the first of the 32 (non-end paper) pages, the publication information is on the flip-side, and the story begins on the facing page.
I assume there are books out there that resemble Bob Staake’s diagram, which shows printing on the backside of end papers, etc., but this revised version is closer to the books I’m familiar with.
Here’s Michael’s version (click to see the full size):
![reviseddummy reviseddummy](https://web.archive.org/web/20090312122239im_/http://drawn.ca/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2009/03/reviseddummy-500x332.jpg)
And here’s Bob’s version again:
![bookdummy2jpg bookdummy2jpg](https://web.archive.org/web/20090312122239im_/http://drawn.ca/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2009/03/bookdummy2jpg.jpeg)
So who’s right? By my calculations, neither of them. Of course, they’re not wrong, but certainly neither guide should be treated as gospel.
For example, neither
Where the Wild Things Are
nor
The Cat in the Hat
, arguably two of the world’s most famous picture books, follow
either
of Bob or Michael’s guidelines.
A quick survey of the picture books on my shelves reveal books with 10, 12, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 21, 23, 27, and even 30 spreads. And of those, there are books with publication info at the front, publication info at the back, books with multiple title pages, books with no title page, books with blank pages, books that begin or end on a single page, books that begin or end on a double-page spread, and all manner of variations.
As it is with all things, there is clearly no one true method. These guides certainly help one understand the basic construction of a physical book, and how it affects page layout, but I’d think twice before letting any one set of rules dictate too strongly how to write your story.
To me it would seem that the best picture book dummies are picture books themselves.