Talk : Tonga at the 2014 Winter Olympics

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GA Review [ edit ]

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Reviewer: Sportsfan77777 ?( talk · contribs ) 17:18, 30 October 2018 (UTC) [ reply ]


I'll review this article. Sportsfan77777 ( talk ) 17:18, 30 October 2018 (UTC) [ reply ]

Lead [ edit ]

  • Tonga made its Winter Olympics debut at the 2014 Winter Olympics in Sochi, Russia from <<<=== Re-word to avoid repeating Winter Olympics. Maybe: "Tonga made its Winter Olympics debut at the 2014 Sochi Olympics in Russia from
  • The name change thing should be in the lead."

Background [ edit ]

  • The 2014 Winter Olympics were held from 7?23 February 2014, a total of 2,780 athletes representing 88 National Olympic Committees took part. <<<=== That comma should be a semi-colon
  • Add something that says it is unusual for Tonga to compete at the Winter Olympics because they are a tropical island in the Pacific Ocean.

Luge [ edit ]

  • Tonga qualified (add "for") a place
  • event during at the 2013?14 Luge World Cup
    • The World Cup is a series of events held in many different locations. Courcelles ( talk ) 19:34, 30 October 2018 (UTC) [ reply ]
  • Add Banani's background as a rugby player.
  • Add that Banani had been training in luge for five years.
  • each day, the final mark <<=== That comma should be a semi-colon

Placing on hold. Sportsfan77777 ( talk ) 17:59, 30 October 2018 (UTC) [ reply ]