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I'll review this article.
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- Tonga made its Winter Olympics debut at the 2014 Winter Olympics in Sochi, Russia from <<<=== Re-word to avoid repeating Winter Olympics. Maybe: "Tonga made its Winter Olympics debut at the 2014 Sochi Olympics in Russia from
- The name change thing should be in the lead."
Background
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- The 2014 Winter Olympics were held from 7?23 February 2014, a total of 2,780 athletes representing 88 National Olympic Committees took part. <<<=== That comma should be a semi-colon
- Add something that says it is unusual for Tonga to compete at the Winter Olympics because they are a tropical island in the Pacific Ocean.
Luge
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- Tonga qualified (add "for") a place
- event
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- The World Cup is a series of events held in many different locations.
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- Add Banani's background as a rugby player.
- Add that Banani had been training in luge for five years.
- each day, the final mark <<=== That comma should be a semi-colon
Placing on hold.
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