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Hello, I've prepared an re-draft of this article at
User:Richard Nevell/sandbox
. Since it mentions work of the Castle Studies Trust and I'm on the charity's board I would appreciate it if someone could have a look and check that the balance is ok. Then if everyone's happy I'd like to copy the contents over to this article.
Richard Nevell
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@
Horis
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@
Rosser1954
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QuintusPetillius
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Rod Oliphant
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What Are The Civilian Applications?
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Hchc2009
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Hi folks, I'm pinging you because you're either listed as a participant at the
Scottish Castles WikiProject
, are
actively editing in the area
, or actively edit articles about castles. Would you be happy with me transferring over the draft of the article as I've outlined above?
Richard Nevell
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For reference: opinions on the redraft
here
and
here
.
Richard Nevell
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- This review is
transcluded
from
Talk:Tibbers Castle/GA1
. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer:
Krishna Chaitanya Velaga
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Well constructed, will get back shortly. Regards,
Krishna Chaitanya Velaga
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Section 1
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- Para 1; sentence 2; Use past tense of the word "record" i.e "recorded". Comma(,) after Sir Richard Siward must be removed. Because it completely disrupts the sentence meaning.
- Para 1; last sentence; Add a comma(,) after "In 1302".
- Para 2; In the sentence "...rs to George Crichton, Lord High Admiral of Scotland and later 1st ....". Add "to the" after "later".
- Para 2: Capitalize "i" at the start of second sentence.
Section 2
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No issues in this section.
Lead
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In last sentence change the tense to "took place" instead of "have taken", because the years of happening were mentioned.
Regards,
Krishna Chaitanya Velaga
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- All good suggestions,
done so far
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Richard Nevell
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- I've done a couple of edits. Good to go.
- GA
review
(see
here
for what the criteria are, and
here
for what they are not)
- It is
reasonably well written
.
- a
(prose, spelling, and grammar)
:
b
(
MoS
for
lead
,
layout
,
word choice
,
fiction
, and
lists
)
:
- It is
factually accurate
and
verifiable
.
- a
(
reference section
)
:
b
(citations to
reliable sources
)
:
c
(
OR
)
:
d
(
copyvio
and
plagiarism
)
:
- It is
broad in its coverage
.
- a
(
major aspects
)
:
b
(
focused
)
:
- It follows the
neutral point of view
policy
.
- Fair representation without bias
:
- It is
stable
.
- No edit wars, etc.
:
- It is illustrated by
images
and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a
(images are tagged and non-free content have
fair use rationales
)
:
b
(
appropriate use
with
suitable captions
)
:
- Overall
:
- Pass/Fail
:
Regards,
Krishna Chaitanya Velaga
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- Thank you for reviewing the article!
Richard Nevell
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