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New draft [ edit ]

Hello, I've prepared an re-draft of this article at User:Richard Nevell/sandbox . Since it mentions work of the Castle Studies Trust and I'm on the charity's board I would appreciate it if someone could have a look and check that the balance is ok. Then if everyone's happy I'd like to copy the contents over to this article. Richard Nevell ( talk ) 21:03, 6 July 2016 (UTC) [ reply ]

@ Horis : @ Rosser1954 : @ QuintusPetillius : @ Rod Oliphant : @ What Are The Civilian Applications? : @ Hchc2009 : Hi folks, I'm pinging you because you're either listed as a participant at the Scottish Castles WikiProject , are actively editing in the area , or actively edit articles about castles. Would you be happy with me transferring over the draft of the article as I've outlined above? Richard Nevell ( talk ) 21:15, 17 September 2016 (UTC) [ reply ]

For reference: opinions on the redraft here and here . Richard Nevell ( talk ) 19:09, 8 November 2016 (UTC) [ reply ]

GA Review [ edit ]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Tibbers Castle/GA1 . The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga ?( talk · contribs ) 06:05, 24 September 2016 (UTC) [ reply ]

Well constructed, will get back shortly. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga ( talk ?? mail ) 06:05, 24 September 2016 (UTC) [ reply ]

Section 1 [ edit ]

  • Para 1; sentence 2; Use past tense of the word "record" i.e "recorded". Comma(,) after Sir Richard Siward must be removed. Because it completely disrupts the sentence meaning.
  • Para 1; last sentence; Add a comma(,) after "In 1302".
  • Para 2; In the sentence "...rs to George Crichton, Lord High Admiral of Scotland and later 1st ....". Add "to the" after "later".
  • Para 2: Capitalize "i" at the start of second sentence.

Section 2 [ edit ]

No issues in this section.

Lead [ edit ]

In last sentence change the tense to "took place" instead of "have taken", because the years of happening were mentioned.

Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga ( talk ?? mail ) 09:13, 24 September 2016 (UTC) [ reply ]

All good suggestions, done so far . Richard Nevell ( talk ) 11:28, 25 September 2016 (UTC) [ reply ]
I've done a couple of edits. Good to go.
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written .
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar) : b ( MoS for lead , layout , word choice , fiction , and lists ) :
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable .
    a ( reference section ) : b (citations to reliable sources ) : c ( OR ) : d ( copyvio and plagiarism ) :
  3. It is broad in its coverage .
    a ( major aspects ) : b ( focused ) :
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy .
    Fair representation without bias :
  5. It is stable .
    No edit wars, etc. :
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales ) : b ( appropriate use with suitable captions ) :
  7. Overall :
    Pass/Fail :

Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga ( talk ?? mail ) 12:21, 25 September 2016 (UTC) [ reply ]

Thank you for reviewing the article! Richard Nevell ( talk ) 12:28, 25 September 2016 (UTC) [ reply ]